Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Persuasive Poems

21 comments:

  1. "I'm Not Unnoticeable!" by Janaya Churn

    "You're too quiet!" is all I hear.
    They say that I'm as quiet as a mouse.
    So quiet that I blend into walls.
    Well, I'm not as quiet as people say I am;
    They just don't notice me because of how loud they are.
    They can't even tell I'm near them, no matter the proximity.
    I can be as loud as one can scream his or her lungs out!
    I can scream and shout until someone hears me from miles away.
    I'm not as quiet as an invisible ghost,
    Sulking because it isn't noticed as much,
    Though it's deceased.
    I'm not loud to the point where someone wants to cut my throat!
    If only people would listen to how I feel about being called "quiet."
    Yes, I can be a bit shy at times.
    Being heard is better than suffering in cruel, harsh, intense silence.
    I'll admit, I have been quiet a few times.
    That doesn't make me unnoticeable, though!
    Do people even see me as a human being, one of them?
    Well, that will be one of my many wonders.
    It will also be a confusing, long journey of answers.
    Yes, answers to why I'm not a part of this world.

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  2. Why you shouldn’t do drugs

    People really shouldn’t do drugs
    They’ll leave you on the street exchanging hugs for money
    You don’t want to be out in the street when the weather gets sunny
    The opposite of incidental
    It‘s a serious offence
    The cops will put you in jail before you get to the present tense
    Even cigarettes,
    The smoke is very dense,
    It fills up your lungs and you won’t be able to climb a fence
    Cigarettes are cancer wrapped up in paper
    Cancer ever heard of it?
    It can make your family cause a fit
    It’s not a laughing matter,
    Not even a bit
    All these other drugs make you crazy,
    Make you go insane
    So what have you learned today?
    Don’t do drugs
    They’re bad for you
    Today, even alcohol counts as a drug too
    In public, it makes u look like you belong in a zoo

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  3. Momma Momma Struggle No More
    by Zaniara

    Knock down the walls of your cold heart.
    Turn on the light of the shadow’s dark.

    Open your eyes to the struggle of life
    Don’t try to flush away your problems when you encounter strife.

    Momma momma struggle no more!

    Laud the Lord for your wonderful gift.
    Don’t let one knock down make you stiff.

    Don’t snub the help of your peers.
    Don’t crawl on one knee with the pain you hide and not care.

    Momma momma struggle no more!

    You’re struggling over the fence as if you’re a cat with one leg.
    Don’t sit on the corner with a hobo and beg.

    Spare change is not what you need.
    Gain some pride and a little boost in deed.

    Momma momma struggle no more!

    Accept help from others and the fact that you need it.
    People can support you as you face life’s grit.

    See the world as a big picture and not a swing ride in the park.
    We aren’t going to always be able to drag you out of the dark.

    Momma momma struggle no more!




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  4. Use your qualities wisely
    Many think because you have special qualities you’re the best
    But you shouldn’t be vain. Your strength, beauty, brain or talents
    May be great but don’t brag. Qualities are like a gift if you
    Understand and use them right they are great and helpful.
    Use your qualities wisely
    Being buff is great and having mussel is great but sometimes
    Strength is better in different place such as your mind and
    Your words. A strong mind is very helpful and contributes to
    Many great beings. A strong word is very powerful and can
    Touch many hearts.
    Use your qualities wisely
    Beauty is wonderful. Being able to be attractive or gorgeous
    Must be a sea of wonder but beauty should be use wisely.
    Using your beauty for a good cause is wise by showing
    Even the most ill people are beautiful is extraordinary.
    Use your qualities wisely
    Being smart is fine but don’t think it’s the only thing because
    You have smart doesn’t mean you can ignore other things by
    Slacking. Use your smarts to contribute to the world and help
    The world progress into a new place.
    Use your qualities wisely
    Talents are very useful and come in many different forms but they are
    Very unique. Many talents are helpful in gaining attention and surprising
    Other and that’s great you should help others but still show the world what
    You can do. Your talents make you unique and great use them wisely they
    Were given to you for a reason.

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  5. Abandonment
    Have you ever seen a lonesome child?
    Waiting to be loved and cared for
    From the inception of his life
    He wanted a parent
    One with a warm heart

    His tears trickled down his face
    He was frightened like a lost puppy
    Wanting back the warmness he once knew
    Wanting a home, wanting a family
    Children without parents suffer harshly

    These wicked people laugh at their pain
    Like it’s some kind of joke
    But these kids have broken hearts
    Hoping for parents to love them
    Hoping to get warm love and joy

    And when they receive this love
    They are joyous flowers
    Grown so high they touch the sky
    Watered daily, and sprinkled with love
    Together we can conquer abandonment of a child

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  6. Does it not matter
    If a brother, sister, or mother is lost
    By anger and the hatred
    of a reckless person?
    Why can't we talk about our problems?

    Plenty of people
    Are dead because of their enemy's anger
    Not knowing that they cam talk out their problems
    Not kill them
    Why can't we talk about our problems?

    Laconic arguments that lead to shoot outs
    Name calling that turns into massacres
    Are all examples of violence
    Think of all the ways that person changed
    Why can’t we talk about our problems?

    Creation is sacred
    Especially the human soul
    People are like snowflakes, unique and diverse,
    And violence is bitter poison
    Why can’t we talk about our problems?

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  7. In the middle
    It is hard to chose a side
    Voices are screaming
    She’s falling apart
    Danger comes from both sides
    No one understands
    She's lost in the dark
    Not knowing where to go
    She watches the enemy carefully
    Feeling as if she is on in a crime show
    What is the crime?
    The frustration of chaos lead her here
    She's as scary as a newly hatched bird
    The answer is closer to evil
    What side should she join?
    This is what happens when two different worlds collide
    She isn’t prepared to make this decision
    It's never easy to be chosen
    Where would she be if her life wasn't a war?

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  8. Never drop out of school
    Children should have a diploma
    They should be independent
    They need to make something out of their lives
    They need to stop sitting on the couch,
    Playing video games or watching TV
    If you didn’t have a diploma
    It’s difficult to get a job or go to college.
    Children that drop out of high school are so inane
    They never get anywhere in life
    If you didn’t get a diploma you need to try
    High school drop outs are like rain drops
    They never go anywhere but the ground
    You shouldn’t be lazy
    Drop outs are trees
    They stand there alone
    Aging and still.
    They are stuck
    Never drop out
    Stay in school
    To become someone

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  9. Kids hate homework
    We learn enough in school
    It takes up our time for the weekend
    Not getting homework would stupefy kids also known has haze
    Not getting homework is like seeing your food coming at a restaurant
    Kids get too much homework
    We go to school for seven hours to get an education
    Sometimes we have so much homework we have to stay up all night
    Staying up all night is not good for the brain
    Teachers say get a good night’s sleep, but we’re up doing homework
    Every year we get ten minutes of more homework
    Kids get stressed because of homework
    Stress is not good for the health
    Sometimes teach don’t explain the work clearly
    Sometimes kids don’t understand homework
    Homework takes over taking care of the family
    Homework is a locked door toward the future
    Homework takes over our free time
    We should never have homework during the summer
    Summer is like a kid’s holiday
    What’s the point of homework

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  10. Protect nature if you see something wrong
    Don’t just stand there help all livings things that there are
    Trees chopped down, all over the ground
    Protect nature so you can hear that nice calming sound
    Smelling that fresh air of cherry blossom
    Protect nature and there won’t be a problem
    Ladybugs can give you a lot of love
    Protect nature so you can enjoy that hug
    People who are being credulity should stop
    Protect nature or someone will called the cops
    Rivers are as cool as a nice summer breeze
    Protect nature and you will like trees
    Snow in the forest is like a magical wonderland
    Protect nature and you will feel grand
    What is that nice yellow flower? It’s called a dandelion
    Protect nature and you will feel like diamonds
    Monarch butterflies here they come
    Protect nature and it will taste like sweet gum
    Nature is a wonderful place
    Protect it and it will never go away

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  11. Violence in the world is not good for women or men
    Being violent means you commit a sin
    Being violent
    Makes you a bad citizen
    Think about it
    At least try to admit
    That you know someone who is violent
    Please don’t be silent
    Report them to the authorities
    Please at least call security
    Don’t let poor children get hit
    Because you would not admit
    Someone who you know who is violent
    Do not let hearts suffer from a loss
    Because you were scared to speak
    You were a bystander
    Not a hand lender
    If you don’t care, you’re as cruel as a killer
    You’re a witch; you’re bitter
    Please do not ignore violence
    Let this problem be cured

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  12. Children all ages
    Are annoyed
    Doing nothing in the house
    Bored after school
    Children can do something that makes them money and entertain themselves
    Children can have jobs
    Stop being lazy and work
    Being lazy like you're sick in bed
    Children can be ready for the future when they become older and have challenging jobs
    They will know what to do and be ready for anything
    When they are finished they can go shopping
    What jobs are there for children you ask?
    Children can have many jobs
    Girls love doing their nail polish
    They can become a nail stylist
    Boys love killing bugs, they can become exterminators
    Girls also are really good at doing their own hair
    They can become hair stylists
    Children can have jobs for their natural talents
    Like myself I am good at giving massages
    I can become a masseuse
    Jobs are a ticket to success
    Children are the pepperoni to the cheese pizza in the world

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  13. I am who I am
    you do not have the right to judge me
    for my religion
    My religion speaks louder then your words
    I pray to who I believe in
    You have no right to judge me in what I do
    If you are interested in learning
    What my religion is all about
    then just ask
    What you believe in I do not know
    I would like to learn instead of judging you
    I have expanded my mind
    I will not limit myself
    My mindset is as large as life
    I want to learn what your religion is all about
    As a person I am not perfect
    but I want to be treated equally as everyone else
    I would like to know what your religion is all about too
    and compare it to mine
    How are we alike?
    How are we different?
    What makes you, you?
    I have the right
    to want to learn about your religion
    so that you don't judge me
    We as a nation should all be philanthropists
    Expand your mind
    think outside of the box
    I am who I am
    You do not have the right to judge me
    for my religion.

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  14. Today is the day that the world needs to change
    Let’s finish off the litter and keep our city clean
    If anyone’s against then they don’t deserve live the lives they have
    It’s time we clean up the streets and stop all the violence
    If it takes years then it will be all worth it to try and change our world
    In the end we the people will try and change the way we live today
    We need to change because the world is starting to look like a dumpster
    It is the time we made the change and clean up the mess we made
    The world is our lives which if we do not take care of we may lose
    Today is the day we stand up and change to for us not to live this way.
    I am told that as newer people move into Philadelphia
    To go to college they throw away there trash and not just throw it on the ground
    When more and more people come to our city an take care of it the way
    They did theirs I think to myself and say
    Why can’t we do this and live in a clean world
    My mother tells me that as we move on our world will have changed
    And I believe that over times our lives will be made different
    There are many days were I go and pick up trash up and down our block
    I try every day to change how I live so why don’t you try
    So help me today to make the change and make Philadelphia a better place

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  15. There are black shadows that torment us for enjoyment
    Yet they don’t know what we are carrying inside
    They don’t know what’s going on in our lives that made us the way we are
    All is for fun and games but some are taken to the edge because of it
    People don’t get how important this topic is
    They don’t see it’s hurting them inside
    It makes them insecure about how they look, talk, and act
    It shows how much people care about themselves
    I think that people bully others just to get reactions
    Just to break people down
    Everyone on this planet is resplendent,
    Different in their own ways
    All are unique but some are just good at hiding it
    Worried about what others might think
    Because of this problem people end their lives
    Rather than be who they are
    It’s like a tornado breaking hearts
    I wish that the bullies would see they are tearing old images apart
    We need to take a stand against bullying
    Wouldn’t you want it that way?
    Don’t you want your children to be safe?

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  16. One thing I know for sure is that racism is still alive today.
    Watching the verdict of Trayvon Martin’s trail with my grandmother was a very powerful experience.
    All along, deep down in my heart from the very beginning,
    I felt that George Zimmerman was guilty.
    He killed a young black man
    and I felt he needed to do time for his crime.
    While lying down on the floor listening to the 911 call for the first time
    I felt that Zimmerman heart was as cold as ice.
    Zimmerman rolled the dice on Trayvon’s life
    and Trayvon ultimately paid the price.
    After reading and reviewing Trayvon Martian’s biography
    I discovered we have many things in common; nine to be exact.
    In fact, the Trayvon and I are both in February,
    Are young black males,
    have the letter M in both our last names, and
    wear the similar appeal such as hoodies.
    In reality, that could have be me!
    Have you ever considered if Trayvon had been anyone else at this time?
    Wouldn’t he be studying or trying to get his bachelor’s degree?
    While writing this poem,
    the saying that stands out most is:
    “Don’t judge a book by its cover.”
    If Zimmerman had made the right choice
    and listened to the 911 operator,
    maybe he would have discovered that Trayvon was not a fighter but a lover.
    Because Zimmerman was so “tough” in the end Trayvon was rebuffed.
    I want people to uncover the fact that they cannot recover the deeds that Zimmerman has done.
    In fact he was just divorced by his wife.
    My advice to Zimmerman is to pray, go to church, and remember
    the pen is mightier than the sword.
    Using words on a piece of paper expressing how you feel is
    better than killing another human.
    The action of Zimmerman killing Trayvon Martian
    will stay with me forever.

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  17. If a war starts, should we fight back?
    Should we use bombs, planes, and nuclear weapons to solve the problem?
    Or should talk give reasons why not to.
    What would Syria look like after a airstrike on there country?
    Would Syria look dark and barren like a dark pit?

    We have allies in order to make the right decision
    With the people of Syria getting hurt with sarin gas
    Women, children, and men are killed at his command
    The Untied States can stop this by talking
    Because Bashar Hafez al-Assad is doing all things and delineating his country

    We should not do the airstrike because everyone should get a second chance
    The United States is the light that will make Bashar Hafez al-Assad sorry his deeds
    Bashar Hafez al-Assad is putting many in danger for his mistakes
    No matter who they are everybody gets an equal amount of rights
    If there no equal rights the world would go crazy as a person in a straight jacket
    So I ask you again
    What would the world be like after war?
    Who will win?
    Syria is helpless because of Bashar

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  18. Some people think that animals don’t have feelings.
    I have seen a pit bull being beaten by an old man
    Who choked the dog with the dog’s leash.
    Do you not love your dog?
    Some people do not feed their pets daily.
    Have you no thoughts about how it feels to be hungry or thirsty?
    People put dogs in fights for bets and do not care if they are injured.
    Has a dog ever comforted you?
    How can you watch a dog being mauled?
    People enslave animals and make them do things they don’t want to do.
    Do you not care?
    I have seen dogs tied to a tree and left in the heat for hours.
    Do you not remember how those dogs protected you?
    The atrophy of neglected animals makes me feel blighted
    Because of the way they are being treated.
    Why are you not a good person?
    People tell their dogs to sit or stay in one place like a statue
    and then leave them.
    Have you forgotten your dog is your friend?
    I have seen people tell a dog to attack people.
    Why can’t you treat your animals correctly?
    People adopt them and don’t give them proper medical assistance.
    Are you only thinking about yourself?
    We poach animals for their suits of skin
    But we should love them and care for them.
    People are cruel to animals
    They break their glass hearts and step on the shattered pieces.

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  19. Free from Slavery

    We should be free
    Free from slavery
    All we want is peace
    We are not saying this with levity
    We are speaking with respect
    We’re trying to fix this quandary

    But you won’t listen
    Bring peace to this nation
    Show love and care for others
    Help see our way out of it
    We’re rhinos
    Fearless people of the US

    It’s not that we’re colored
    It’s that we are as bold as a gorilla
    We want peace
    Skin color is just what we look like
    Not how we feel
    We are not aliens from a different planet
    We are from earth created by God just like you

    We are American
    Just like you
    We work all day
    Hoping to be free
    Because that’s how it should be

    Do not enslave those of color
    It will make a very big division between people and their rights
    Slavery is fallacious sovereignty
    Slavery starts wars
    and wars destroy peace between others

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  20. As I sit on the trolley I hear teens brag about beating someone up
    Watching the news every other day seeing that a young teen has been killed
    Bullies in the school act miserly and beat other kids for no reason
    Innocent children runway as the bully tries to harm them
    Nothing I could do as he slams the innocent boy
    Bones crushing like glass
    The bully runs away as the boy cries hoping for someone to help
    Hearing gunshot people screaming
    Thinking to myself why
    But you have to get back up
    Listening to the women and man arguing soon after listening to them fight
    It’s ashame because no one does anything
    Looking at two men fight over a simple game
    One man chokes the other and his face turns blue as the sea
    Ignorant kids fight each other when they tease each other
    But you have to get back up
    Teens being disrespectful to adults and wound up hurting them
    Drug dealers beat up people if they don’t have their money
    A man walking up to a pregnant women and hurts her
    When she falls she hurts her stomach
    I wonder why they do this
    But you to get back up

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  21. Gesu School
    Jafar Thomas September 12, 2013
    Writing
    Anti-Wars

    The world does not need wars
    Wars are evil
    Wars prevent people from living their lives
    Wars are for people who only want power and money
    Some people are beguiled into thinking that our soldiers are doing well
    By raiding other countries
    Killing innocent lives is like living without the sun
    Every war is not needed
    There is another way of negotiation
    War is like being stung by a thousand bees
    Do not make excuses for war
    It is a tragic and horrible experience
    The havoc people feel
    War is a room filled with poisonous spiders
    Do not shed blood
    Cancel the violence
    Stop hurting the innocent
    Start peaceful ceremonies and marches against wars
    We shall not pretend that the innocent in other countries do not have feelings
    They are just as human as anyone of us
    Wars are not necessary for the success of the world
    Create a meeting hall
    Do not cause people to feel sad
    The world needs to hate wars
    Think of how many of people have died
    Think about how you would feel if you lost family members in a war
    As a human being I do not agree with wars
    Please find another way to solve your problems
    Violence is definitely not needed
    End wars now!

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